中考英语作文:致可爱的上海 To be a lovely Shanghainese

To be a lovely Shanghainese(2003年上海市英语中考题)

审题：该题的重点在于阐述作为一个可爱的上海人，我们关键应怎样做？在2003年的考生作文中，有一部分同学发生了严重的偏题，把描述重点放在形容上海是怎样的一个大都市，因此失分很多。由此看来，审题的准确是非常重要的。

学生作文：Shanghai is developing quickly everyday. Quite a few foreigners come to visit Shanghai. As the hosts of Shanghai, we must be lovely Shanghaineses to tell the visitors that Shanghai is an international city. To be a lovely Shanghainese, first, we should do our best to make the city more beautiful to show our enthusiasm. Next, we should be kind and friendly to everyone. We must do so to make our guests fell our zeal. Finally, we should study and work hard to rise our ability. Shanghai is developing and we should make progress to follow the epoch.

上海每天都在迅速发展。相当多的外国人来访问上海。作为东道主的上海，我们必须用可爱的上海话告诉游客，上海是一个国际城市。做可爱的上海人，首先，我们应该尽我们最大的努力让城市更美丽的展示我们的热情。接下来，我们应该友好和友好的每个人。我们必须这样做，使我们的客人下降我们的热情。最后，我们应该努力学习，努力提高自己的能力。上海正在发展，我们应该在时代进步。