英语写作指导:中考英语作文指导与训练三：命题作文

三、命题作文训练

A.写人

1、以 My Mother 为题，用英语写一篇短文。要点：

① 妈妈是护士，在县人民医院工作。 她工作努力，工作中严格要求自己，因此，她的同事们对他评价很高；

② 2003年参加抗击非典的战斗。为了保护我们免受非典的侵害，一个多月没回家。当时，我非常想念妈妈； ③ 我爱妈妈，并为妈妈而自豪。

参考词汇：县 county；　 抗击fight against； 战斗battle；　　　 非典 SARS；

My mother

My mother is a nurse. She works in the peoples Hospital of our county. She works very hard. She is very strict with herself in the work. So her workmates speak highly of her.

In 2003 she took part in the battle to fight against SARS. She was away from home for more than one month. So I missed her very much, but I knew she was trying her best to protect us from SARS and she was doing an important thing.

I love my mother very much, and I am very proud of having such a great mother. I should learn the spirit of working hard and being strict in the work from her. When I grow up, I would like to be a person like my mother.

2、根据材料写一篇关于运动员张怡宁的报道：

NameZhang YiningsexgirlCityBeijing

Birth1982.10.5height1.68mweight52 kilos

Achieve -ments六岁开始学习乒乓球， 在1999年45届世乒赛上显示非凡的实力，获得亚军。 在2004年的雅典奥运会上夺得金牌。 在刚刚结束的国际世乒赛上夺得女子单打冠军，成为乒乓球领域中的顶尖。

Id like to introduce a girl to you. Her name is Zhang Yining. She was born in Beijing in 1982. She is 1.68 meters tall and weighs 52 kilos. At the age of six, she began to play table tennis. In 1999, she won the second at the 45th Table Tennis World Championships. In the 2004 Athens Olympic Games, she won the first. And now she won the womens singles at the ITTF World Cup. She becomes the top of the table tennis field. We hope she will make greater progress in the future.

3、在初中三年的学习生活中，你一定交了不少好朋友，留下了许多美好的回忆。请以My Best Friend Tom/Mary 为题，写一篇100词左右的短文，介绍一位你最要好的朋友，男生姓名用Tom；女生姓名用Mary统一代替。

内容要求：1、他/她的外貌特征和个性特点； 2、你们一起经历的一件你印象特别深刻的事情。

注 意：严禁使用真实的校名和姓名

My Best Friend Tom

Tom is my best friend. He has short hair and wears a pair of glasses. He is shorter but a little bit stronger than I am. In my eyes, he is a clever and brave boy.

One day we went to school by bus together as usual. The bus was so crowded at the rush time. Oh, my god! Wheres my wallet? A woman beside us cried suddenly. We thought there must be a thief around us, and we tried to help her but failed in the end. The next stop was coming and the woman became more worried. Just then Tom rushed to the driver quickly and told him what happened.

All the passengers were taken to the police station and the thief was caught. We were late for class that morning; however, we felt excited at that unusual experience.

B.状物

1、以My hometown为题，介绍家乡的地理、气候、风景、人文和风俗习惯等。字数约80个。

My hometown is in Kunming. Kunming is the capital of Yunnan province. Kunming is also a very beautiful city. It is called the City of Eternal Spring, because it has spring-like climate all the year round. The Crossbridge Rice Noodles are famous traditional food of Yunnan. There is a famous exposition centre in Kunming. It is in the northern suburbs of Kunming. The Expositions theme is Man and Nature -Marching into the 21st Century. And in Yunnan there are twenty-six nationalities. It is a big family. Welcome to my hometown.

2、以My family为题，介绍家庭基本情况，字数约80个。

3、我市刚建成一座图书馆，请根据信息，用英文简短介绍：

1、时间：竣工：2006年6 月； 开放：2006年7月

2、地址：在中山路，与科学博物馆相邻, 对面是公园。

3、馆内设施：

三层会议室电脑室

二层卫生间Room for storing Books (10万册)

一层咨询台阅览室阅览室Childrens Home

A big library has been built for people in our city. It was finished in June, 2006. It will be open in July. The library is on Zhongshan Road, next to the Science Museum. On the other side of the road, theres a park. There are three floors in the library. On the first floor, there are two reading rooms, and therere many kinds of books in it. On the second floor, there is a washing room and a room for storing books. It has about 10,000 books. On the third floor, theres a big meeting room and a computer room. The computer room has fifty computers. Books are my best friends. We should love books. Because they give us knowledge and make us happy.

4、中国加入 WTO 后，有一大批外国人来我市--泉州参观。假设你是导游，请根据以下内容，向外宾简单介绍我市的情况。

要求： 1. 100 词左右； 2. 要点包括： a. 有悠久的历史，位于福建省的东部，离福州 198 公里，人口约 524 万。 b. 有许多名胜古迹，如清源山；东湖等等；东湖是一个很美丽的地方，湖水清澈，无污染；湖中有各种各样的鱼；你可以到那里划船，野餐，钓鱼，是度假的好去处。你也可以去参观市博物馆，在那里你可以看到许多恐龙化石。c. 祝大家在泉州玩得愉快。

Ladies and gentlemen,

Welcome to Quan Zhou, now let me introduce our city -Quan Zhou to you. Quan Zhou is a city with a long history. It is in the northeast of Guangdong and 198 kilometers away from Guangzhou. It has a population of 5,240,000.

There are many places of interest in Quan Zhou, such as Qingyuan Mountain, East Lake and so on. East Lake is a beautiful place. The water is clean and not polluted. There are all kinds of fish in it. You can go boating, go fishing and have a picnic there. It is really a good place to spend your holiday. Besides, you can go and visit Quan Zhou n Museum. There you can see a lot of dinosaur egg fossils.

I hope you can enjoy yourselves in Quan Zhou.

Thank you.

C.记事

1、根据中文提示和英文提示词语，写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑的短文。所给英文提示词语必须用上。字数60～70左右。

1、昨天晚上我和妈妈出去散步。 　　2、在路上我遇到了一个外国人。

3、他向我询问去温泉饭店的路。

4、我告诉他沿着路往前走，在第三个转弯处向左拐就能看见饭店。

5、他非常感谢我，我也为能帮他而感到高兴。

提示词语：go out for a walk, on the road, the way to, walk along, on the left, thank for, be happy that

Yesterday evening, I went out for a walk with my mother. On the road, we met a foreigner. He asked me the way to the Hot Spring Hotel. I told him to walk along the road and take the third turning on the left, then he could see the hotel. He thanked me very much for my help. I was happy that I could help him.

D.议论

1、同学们，看到下面的四幅图片及相应的报道后，你感到最担忧的是哪两种情形？请简述你担忧的理由并提出建议或希望。要求：

⒈ 从所给素材中任选两种情形进行阐述，不可多选或少选。

⒉ 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确；⒊ 词数 80 ～ 100。

参考词汇： 建议 suggest v. suggestion n.气体 gas n.　 污染 pollution n.

THE pOLLUTIONS

① One third of the worlds people dont have enough clean water.

② More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.

③ people are disturbed quite often by kinds of noises.

④ Every person in our city makes about 1.8 kilos of rubbish every day.

The environment is becoming worse and worse. There are many kinds of pollution I worry about. The most serious two are water pollution and air pollution, because people cant live healthily with dirty water and polluted air, nor can animals. More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.

I think factories should not pour dirty water into the river directly or produce more waste gas. Wed better go on foot or by like instead of by car, because more cars mean more waste gas. We should make our world more and more beautiful.

E.任务型小作文

1、Li Lei生病，去看医生，请帮他描述病情，并帮医生向Li Lei提建议。

Li Lei: Im not feeling well today. I think I have a headache. And I have got a cough._____.(不少于2句)

Doctor: You should eat some medicine and lie down for a rest. You had better drink more water. Dont talk too much. (不少于3个建议)

2、小明和小华是在手拉手活动中结成的一对学习伙伴。前不久，小明来信向小华询问如何学好英语。请你以小华的名义给他写封回信。内容包括：

A、学习英语的基本方法 ( listen carefully; speak much; read widely; learn...by heart; practice writing;...) ;

B.你的体会和其他建议。

词数：80词左右。信的开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Xiao Ming,

Im glad to receive your letter. In your letter you asked me about how to learn English well. I think you must listen carefully and be active in class. Speak as much as possible. Dont be afraid of making mistakes. Youd better read widely and learn some important parts by heart. You should practice writing often. Of course there are many other ways.

You can also see English films, learn to sing English songs or make pen pals with foreigners. They are all very helpful. Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it. Im sure youll learn English well.

Yours,

Xiao Hua

3、假如你是泉州清源山风景区的管理人员，请你用英语为游客订出一些规章制度，内容包括：环境卫生保护、森林防火安全、乱涂乱刻(crave)、树木保护、人身安全等，至少5句。

Notice to the Tourists

1、please keep the place clean and tidy.

2、Dont throw rubbish onto the ground.

3、No smoking is allowed.

4、Dont use fire on the mountains.

5、Dont cut down the trees

6、Dont crave on the trees.

please be careful when you climb up and down the mountains.