大学英语作文:the Daily Use of Ichthaid 每日使用ichthaid

In this memo, the speaker argues that West Meria public Health Council recommend the daily use of Ichthaid as a good way to prevent colds and lower absenteeism, by citing the study indicating that in nearby East Meria people visit the doctor only once or twice per year for the treatment of colds attributing to the high consumption of fish. Elaborate considered, whereas, this argument is ridiculous in several aspects and thus logically unreliable. At first glance, the study, failing to give us a series of detailed information, is quite dubious here. Since the sample size of the people surveyed is missing, it is unfair to say that the result of the study is relatively representative. Moreover, the speaker is unable to mention the background of the select group of the survey, so here comes the possibility that a large amount of people do not come to visit the doctor when they catch a cold, which makes the conclusion of the study unreliable. Furthermore, the arguer hastily comes to a conclusion that eating a substantial amount of fish can prevent colds. Without careful deduction, the speaker overlooks a large variety of other factors which may help to diminish the chance of falling colds. It is perhaps that people in East Meria have a good living habit which is an effective way of preventing cold, such as drinking a bottle of boiled water before going to bed. Or there is a good chance that people in the East Meria keep going to swimming after supper and thus they keep the body fit. All to all, it is unfair to say that eating a substantial amount of fish is a direct factor of cold prevention. However, even the forgoing assumptions come into existence, the fact colds are the reason most frequently given for absences from school and work is still doubtable. To be the most common illness, it is of a great possibility that people like to use colds to be an excuse for being absent. With regard to this cheating fact, it is unsafe to correlate the colds with the most cases of absences from school and work. Finally, the arguer makes a seemingly normal analogy of the situation in West Meria and East Meria, regarding that the two areas share a lot of similarities. Carefully scrutinized, however, various kinds of differences between them have been overlooked. For one thing, in West Meria, it is recommended to eat Ichthaid which is a nutritional supplement derived from fish oil. While in East Meria, it is merely the fish as a whole to be consumed. Moreover, there exists the likelihood that the average age of the population in two regions is dissimilar. For instance, majority of the residents in Ease Meria are oldsters which are apt to illness as a result. Hence, with elaborate consideration, it is unreliable for the arguer to draw such an unreasonable conclusion aiming to persuade the West Meria inhabitants to have Ichthaid everyday. To make a conclusion, it is unjust for the arguer to make such recommendation to ask the West Meria people to use daily Ichthaid in order to reduce the chance of catching colds so as to reduce the absenteeism in school and job. To strengthen the argument, the arguer should not only give us a reliable survey, but also take other probable factors into account.

在这份备忘录中，说话人认为，West Meria公共健康委员会推荐的日常使用ichthaid作为预防感冒和更低的缺勤的好方法，通过引用的研究表明人们在附近的East Meria访问医生只有一次或两次，每年用于治疗感冒，归因于高消费的鱼。精心考虑，而这一论点是荒谬的，在几个方面，从而在逻辑上不可靠。乍一看，这项研究，未能给我们一系列详细的信息，是相当可疑的。由于调查的样本量少，这是不公平的，这是不公平的，这项研究的结果是比较有代表性。此外，说话人是不能提及的背景选择组的调查，所以这里来的可能性，大量的人没有来拜访医生当他们赶上一冷，这使得研究可靠的结论。此外，论述者匆忙得出结论，吃大量的鱼可以预防感冒。如果没有仔细的推论，演讲者可以忽略其他因素，这可能有助于减少感冒的几率。也许是因为在East Meria人们有良好的生活习惯，是预防感冒的有效方法，如喝一瓶开水睡前。或者有一个很好的机会，在East Meria人继续去游泳，晚饭后，他们保持身体健康。所有的一切，这是不公平的说，吃大量的鱼是一个直接因素，预防感冒。然而，即使上述假设成立，事实上，感冒是最常见的缺课和缺席的原因仍然是值得怀疑的。是最常见的疾病，这是一个很好的可能性，人们喜欢使用感冒是不存在的理由。对于这种欺骗的事实，它是对感冒与学校和工作岗位的缺席的大多数情况下，相关的不安全。最后，作者让一个看似正常的类比的情况在West Meria，East Meria，关于这两方面有很多相同的地方。仔细检查，然而，各种差异被忽视了。首先，在West Meria，建议吃ichthaid是来自鱼油的营养补充。而在East Meria，它仅仅是作为一个整体来食用鱼。此外，存在的可能性，人口的平均年龄在2个地区是不同的。例如，在安逸的居民大多数是老人Meria，容易生病的结果。因此，精心考虑，为论述者得出这样一个不合理的结论旨在说服西方居民有ichthaid Meria日常是不可靠的。得出结论，这是不公正的arguer提出这样的建议问West Meria人们日常使用ichthaid为了减少感冒，降低缺勤率在学校和工作机会。加强论点，论述者不仅要给我们一个可靠的调查，同时采取其他可能的因素考虑进去。