高考英语作文:An Friend Indeed 一个真正的朋友

True friends always come to you when their help is in need.They try their best to help you without thinking what they can get from it. This invariably wins them love and respect from otbers, for they devote themselves to the happiness of others.

Up to the time of my writing this article, Aero has been helping me with my selecting the courses with great effort. He is a friendly and zealous guy. I think he has been liked by others since long ago because of his characteristics. He is always brisk,enthusiastic, energetic and he is smiling no matter when or where you see him. However, I like him for some other reason.It seems that between us there is a special way to communicate and its not the usual way through which we communicate such as words and gestures. He has always been a friend of mine be cause I like the way he acts and lives and the way we communicate.

One morning a week ago, he came to me and asked if he could be of help. Actually I had been worrying about my course of this semester for days since I hadnt got any English courses yet! Still I was totally caught off guard by Aeros offer though he had always been kind. I thought it was my own business and it had never occurred to me that some other individual would offer to help with my selecting the courses. So I declined his kindness. The very next day, I got a cough and it later turned out to be a four-day high fever. In those days, I was extremely weak and lay in bed all day long and hardly had any strength even to eat. I lost the power to keep an eye on the possible vacancies of the English courses ever since I got a high fever. I began to regret declining Aeros offer. Just at that moment, Aero called,asking about my health and told me to have a good rest, saying that he would shoulder the responsibility of selecting my English courses for me. Now I am writing this article as the homework of this writing course and Id like to re emphasize that it is all due to my friends effort that I have finally made it.

I was really grateful to him when he called and offered to help and it is hard to express my gratitude with words. All I want to say about it is that at that moment, I realized that he had offered to help not because it made him feel he was important but because he meant business. Hes a man of integrity. I am proud of having such a friend.

真正的朋友总是在他们需要帮助的时候来到你的帮助下，他们会尽力帮助你，而不去想他们能从中得到什么。他们总能赢得爱和尊重otbers，因为他们把自己奉献给别人的幸福。

在我写这篇文章的时候，航空公司一直在帮我的忙，我的课程很有帮助。他是一个友好和热情的家伙。我认为他是因为他的特点而喜欢别人的。他总是很活跃，热情，精力充沛，他是在微笑，无论何时何地，你看到他。然而，我喜欢他，因为有些其他的原因，似乎在我们之间有一种特殊的方式来沟通，这不是通常的方式，我们沟通，如文字和手势。他一直是我的一个朋友，我喜欢他的行为和生活方式和我们沟通的方式。

一个星期前的一个早晨，他来问我，问他是否可以帮忙。实际上，我一直在担心我的这学期的课程，因为我没有任何英语课程了！尽管他一直很善良，我还是完全被航空公司的报价所吸引。我想这是我自己的事，我从来没有想到过会有其他人会帮助我选择课程。所以我拒绝了他的好意。第二天，我咳嗽了，后来变成了一个为期4天的高烧。在那些日子里，我非常虚弱，躺在床上整天，几乎没有任何力量，甚至吃。我失去了权力，以保持眼睛的可能空缺的英语课程，自从我得到了一个高烧。我开始后悔航空公司的报价。就在那一刻，航空打来电话，询问我的健康状况，告诉我有一个好的休息，他说他会承担责任，选择我的英语课程。现在，我写这篇文章作为家庭作业的写作课程，我想强调的是，这是因为我的朋友的努力，我终于使它。

我真的很感激他，当他打电话给他，并提供帮助，这是很难用言语表达我的感激之情。所有我想说的是，在那一刻，我意识到，他提供帮助，并不是因为这让他觉得自己很重要，但因为他意味着企业。他是个正直的人。我为有这样一个朋友而感到骄傲。

简 评

作者先写什么样的朋友是真正的朋友，然后介绍他就有这样一位能及时帮助别人又不图报答的好友。

利用选课这样一件事，作者栩栩如生地刻画了有血有肉的朋友。真正的朋友会在你需要时出现。本文描写生病后朋友再次打电话问候，并询问选课事宜。没有比得到朋友真诚而无私的帮助更令人快慰的事了。

不足之处在于思路欠清晰，段落间缺乏连贯，用词不够多样化。