高考英语作文:生活方式的改变Life style change
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说明文
重点诠释
1.说明文是以说明为主要表达方式,用简洁明了的语言来解释说明事物,阐明事理,从而给读者提供知识的一种文体。
2.在高考书面表达中,其主要命题形式为图表式作文,有时也以图画式和提纲式作文来呈现写作材料。
3.它要求语言要简明扼要,通俗易懂,说明过程讲究层次性和条理性。
4.这种文体通常用第三人称,时态以一般现在时为主。
写作典例:
根据以下图画,写一篇英语短文,描述今昔通讯方式的变化,以及这些变化给人们生活带来的影响。
注意:
1.词数:100左右
2.生词:通讯:communicate (with sb.) vi. communication n.
互联网:the Internet n.
案例分析
从材料的呈现方式及材料所提供的要求描述变化及影响可知,本文应该用说明文体来写作。时态的把握是本文的一大难点,一般情况下,说明文应用一般现在时,但本文描述的是今昔通讯方式的变化,所以在描写过去通讯方式的时候要用一般过去时,例如in the past, people kept in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or using the public telephone 及It used to take several days to hear from each other.在描写过去发生的动作对现在造成的影响时,谓语动词要用现在完成时,例如本文的起始句可用Great changes have taken place in the way of communication in peoples life in recent years及讲述影响的过渡句with these changes, peoples pace of life has been quickened and peoples work has been made more dfficient. 相对来说,本文用第三人称容易把握。
高分范文
Great changes have taken place in the way of communication in peoples life in recent years.
In the past, people kept in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or using the public telephone. But now almost everyone has his own mobile phone.people can communicate with each other almost at any place and at any time. Whats more, people have easy access to the Internet, which enables them to send and receive e-mails whenever they like.With these changes, peoples pace of life has been quickened and peoples work has been made more efficient. It used to take several days to hear from each other, but now it takes only several minutes, even if they are in two different continents.
近年来,人们的生活方式发生了巨大的变化。
在过去,人们主要通过写信或使用公用电话来保持联系。但现在几乎每个人都有自己的手机,人们几乎可以在任何地点和任何时间进行交流。更甚的是,人们很容易进入互联网,这使得他们可以随时发送和接收电子邮件,这些变化,人们的生活节奏加快,人们的工作已经取得了更高的效率。过去花了好几天才听对方的话,但现在只需要几分钟,即使他们在不同的大陆上。
In a word, people have an easier life nowadays.
一句话,现在人们更容易生活。