高考英语作文:满分作文 租房 Rental

作文题目

假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。

注意：

1.词数：100左右：

2.参考词汇：房租Tent(n.).

Im very happy to receive your letter, and Im glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but Ill try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.

我很高兴收到你的来信，我很高兴听到你会去中国学习中文。我已经找到了你的菲亚特。在芳草街，不远处就是我们中文学校。你可以坐11路车，前一站就是中文学校。公寓第三层有3间，其中一间是卧室，另一间是浴室和厨房。这里有一张床，一张沙发，一张桌子和几把椅子，在这25平方米的小公寓里，租金是每月500元。也许这辆菲亚特不是你的愿望，但我会尽我最大的努力来满足你的需求。如果不够，写信给我，我会找另一个更好的地方。

Hope you will come here soon!希望你不久就来这儿！

All the best!所有最好的！

Yours, Li Hua你的，李华

满分理由

本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以which，引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。